I should have proof read my comment closer!
The sentence should read”…inserts a needless declarative…”
The Seduction of Sue
Submitted to Allurestorm by Foxy Sue
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“The following is a description of what happened when I got together with Jen and her husband John for the first time. This took place about a week after Jen and I got together at her house which was described in my Adventure at the Mall story.”
Jack came home early from work that day(for him anyway), he said that hewas having trouble concentrating on anything at work and wanted to be home to support me. I was too nervous to eat anything and Jack heated up some leftovers and I decided to take a long, leisurely soak in the bathtub with a glass of wine. As I sank into the hot water and drank a few sips of wine, I started to feel a little less anxious. I started to get mad at myself for feeling this way, I mean what could really happen later. I didn’t get any sense from Jen that John was anything but a great lover, husband, and father to their kids. I knew that I needed to get through these feelings in order to enjoy myself when I met him. It’s just that Jack has always been there as a safety net when I’ve fucked other men, and allowed me to let myself go from an emotional standpoint and just enjoy the sex without any fears. Jack came into the bathroom and sat on the toilet seat and we began to talk. He reassured me that nothing I could do that night would jeopardize our strong relationship, and for me to just go enjoy whatever happens. I had to promise him, though that I would tell him every detail when I came home. I promised him I would but reminded him that Jen had said on the phone that this was only going to be a “getting to know each other” better meeting as John had a early flight out the next morning to attend a business meeting. Jack said that he had to make a few phone calls and leaned over and briefly kissed me leaving me to soak in the tub for over an hour longer.
I was really starting to become more relaxed and looked at my watch and saw that it was 7:45, I planned to leave about 9:45 so I got out of the tub to start drying my hair and put my make-up on. I was feeling a lot more relaxed now as I took great care in applying mymake-up and getting dressed. I wanted to look just perfect, I had decided to wear what Jack and I call my “fuck-me” dress. It is a black U-neck dress held up by two spaghetti straps and the bottom of it is about 4 inches above my knees. It has underwire support that lifts my tits and is somewhat loose at the very top allowing my cleavage and the tops of my tits to show.
The only underwear I put on was my sexy black thong panties, I usually wear either a garter with black stockings or panty hose but decided to wear neither that night. It was about 9:30 when I finally finished and went downstairs to gathermy purse and coat, Jack was sitting on the couch watching TV and talking to someone on the phone. When he saw me enter the room, he told the person he was talking to that he would call them back later. He stood, and said “Wow, do you look fantastic! I just know that John is going to love how you look, what man wouldn’t!” I blushed a little even though I’ve heard Jack that a thousand times before. He got up from the couch and walked over to me saying, “Have a wonderful time, and remember how much I love you!” He gave me a hug and a nice long tongue kiss, then said as I was walking toward the front door, “Enjoy yourself!” As I walked to the car I couldn’t help but think how much I loved him, and how much I appreciated him giving me space while I was getting ready to go out tonight. I felt really lucky that after all our 23 years of marriage that we have kept our sexual fires burning fueled by our ability to separate fucking from true love. I don’t remember much of the short 15 minute or so drive to their house,but as I turned into their street I could the excitement(not nervousness) starting to build again. I parked my car in their driveway turned off the ignition, took a deep breath and said to myself “Well, I’m finally here, make the best of it”. I exited the car and went up the walkway to their front door taking another deep breath and rang the doorbell. A few seconds later, the door opened and I saw John for the first time in person. “Hi, I’m Sue!” “And I’m John, please come in”, he said. “Can I take your coat? Jen isn’t home from work yet but I expect her any minute.” As I started to remove my coat he went behind me and helped me take it off. I was thinking to myself, well that scores points as least he is a gentleman. He hung my coat in the closet and walked back toward me our eyes taking each other in for the first time. He then scored some MAJOR points by saying, “Wow, you are absolutely stunning, Sue! Jen’s description of you didn’t do you justice!” I felt myself blush again for the second time that night. I just couldn’t help putting my finger on my head and doing a 360 in front of him. I replied, “And the pictures of you I saw didn’t do you justice either!” He looked to be about 6′ tall, and probably about 180-190lbs with dark hair like Jen. He was good-looking in a rugged sort of way, certainly not a pretty boy, and was wearing a short-sleeve pullover shirt that showed off his chest and upper arm muscles and grey sweat pants. John then proceeded to mimic me by putting his finger on his head and doing a 360 for me. We both burst out laughing when he finished. I said to him, “I wonder what people would think watching that little show.” We both laughed again, then he asked me, “Would you like a glass of wine, Jen told that you liked merlot, and I stopped at the store on my way home and got a bottle of it?” “That sounds great!”, I replied and he went into the kitchen to get my drink. More points to his credit! Just about the time he was coming back into the living room, the front door opened and the lovely Jen was home.
John set my drink on the table and went over to help Jen off with her coat. I was really starting to get very impressed with John, he seemed to be a real gentleman. Jen turned to me and gave me a hug and a quick kiss on the cheek, and said “I’m sooo glad you came over here tonight. I’ve been looking so forward to it!” John hung her coat up and went over to Jen and gave her a hug and a long kiss. I couldn’t help but feel a little jealous of both Jen and John watching them kiss like that. Jen was the vision of loveliness, I knew that she had to wear a dressfor work and she looked great in it. She had a light blue V-neck on that clearly showed some of her cleavage, it was below her knees but was slit up the side so as she turned you could see halfway up her thighs. “I’m going upstairs to freshen up a bit. John, would you be a dear and pour me a glass of wine?” Before he went back to the kitchen he turned to me and said, “Please make yourself comfortable, I won’t be more than a minute.” I went over and sat down on the couch and took a drink of my wine. Sure enough, John came back shortly carrying a glass of wine for Jen and one for himself and sat down next to me on the couch. A minute or two later Jen came down the stairs and sat next to me on the couch also. Jen took a drink of her wine, then John said, “Let’s go into the den and have our conversation in there.” He got up and so did Jen and I following him through the kitchen and he opened a door leading into a large room at the back of the house. This was the first I had been in there and it was beautiful. John said that they had built this room about two years ago and it had become their hangout. It was beautifully decorated with floor to ceiling windows on three sides, a couch, love seat, and easy chair and a large screen TV against the wall that the door we came through was on. John walked over and sat down in the easy chair, and Jen took my handand led me over to the couch which was directly across from him and we sat down a couple of feet from each other. We began to talk about general things at first, how the two of them met, started dating, falling in love and getting married and having their children, etc. I did the same giving them the details of my life from the time I met and started dating Jack. As we talked I realized why Jen had led me over to the couch, I have become somewhat of a “teaser”. It has become almost an unconscious behavior, and I was aware that as I crossed and uncrossed my legs John had a perfect view up my dress and could see my black panties. He also had a great view of the tops of my tits as I bent over to take a drink of my wine. He was pretty cool about it, trying to give me the sense that he talking or listening to my face, but my woman’s intuition and by my observations of his eye movements I knew that he was furtively sneaking some glances of my “charms”. Of course, knowing that I made sure he got a good look slowing down my motions and lingering bent over as I sipped my wine. After about ten or fifteen minutes of this general chit-chat, the conversation suddenly turned to sexual topics. I remember thinking to myself, “Finally, that this was the reason for us getting together wasn’t it!” I was pretty sure at this point in time that I was going to agree to be their “third party participant”, John had really impressed me so far, he was witty and easy going and just overall a very nice person. I just hoped that he was as “good” in bed as he was out of it as he was close to “charming” my panties off at this point. John proceeded to explain how their sex life had slowly gone downhill after their children were born, until about 5 years ago they both decided they needed to do something to spice it up. They discussed several alternatives before deciding on trying to add another female to their bed. As he explained the rationale behind their decision it really did sound like it made sense. Jen had a few experiences with other women in college, and really enjoyed them. As for John, his ultimate fantasy(as he said like a lot of men) was to have two women in bed with him and have them make love to each other while he watched then fuck them both. So they advertised on one of the Internet sites, and finally after a few months of searching met another woman who they were both comfortable with. Their first meeting was a great success. In the five years since, their sex life had improved tremendously and they have had about ten different women in that time. Hearing him tell me this had gotten me very excited, I could feel my panties getting wet and without looking I could tell that my nipples were hard and showing through my dress. He then went on to say that he and Jen had read the stories about our sexual adventures that Jack has posted on several story sites. He asked me if it was true Jack was turned on watching me getting fucked by another man. “Absolutely, it really intensifies his excitement when he watches me!”, I replied. “I don’t know if I can handle watching Jen with another man, I know itsounds like a double standard with me fucking other women, but I’ve always been afraid of losing her because someone else may be a better lover! I’m working on getting through these feelings and maybe someday I will, but for now I’m happy with Jen and an occasional other woman.” “That will make Jack very disappointed, he was very excited when I described Jen to him and told him about our meeting last week, but he is also fully supportive of me in whatever I feel I want to experience. I know that he will be very anxious to hear my decision when I get home and will want to know every detail.” “He wouldn’t be jealous of you especially since this would be the first time you were with another man without?” “Absolutely not, we are very comfortable with our lifestyle and I can’t think of anything that we might do that would jeopardize our relationship.” “Wow”, he replied.
The three of us sat there in silence for a minute or so. Then John gotup and asked Jen and I, “Would you ladies like another glass of wine, it seems as if we’ve killed one bottle already?” I declined saying that I needed to see only one road on the way home, but Jen said that she would like another one. “I’m going upstairs to check on the kids, and I’ll open another bottleand bring it in on my way back.” As he left the room, I leaned over to Jen and said, “John’s has a great butt from what I can see, and the rest of him is not bad either! I’m really attracted to him, he’s a perfect gentleman and really easy on the eyes.” “I’m so glad that you like him, Sue! I had a feeling that you would if you met him and got to know him a little better, and from the looks he’s been giving you I’m pretty sure he feels the same way about you.” “Yeah, we women have a “sixth sense” knowing when we’re being checkedout!” Jen moved over closer to me, reached her arm around my neck and gentlypulled my head toward her and began to kiss me, her tongue softly tracing the outline of my lips at first then more insistently pushing it between my lips. Her kiss was so sensual, my lips parted instinctively and our tongues began to make love with each other. She whispered to me, “I’ve been waiting all night to kiss you, I just didn’t want to pressure you until I felt more sure that you and John were hitting it off!” “You can’t believe how much I wanted to kiss you and feel you and make sweet love to you again since we were together last week. I’ve thought of almost nothing else!” We turned toward each other and hugged, I could feel her firm tits pushing against mine through our dresses, and I hoped that soon I would feel them against mine with our clothes to interfere. We again began to kiss and started to caress each other’s backs then shortly I moved my hands down to her tight ass, and I felt her hands on mine. Jen then moved her hands up to caress my neck and arms, and in the heat of my rapidly growing passion I didn’t realize until I felt her hands on my bare breasts that she had slipped the straps of my dress off of my shoulders and peeled the top down exposing them. I was lost in the sensations of her hands rubbing all over my tits, pinching and pulling on my sensitive nipples. “OHHHHHH, that feels sooooooo good”, I moaned into her mouth. I moved one of my hands to her legs and began to caress the inside of her thighs. She parted her legs as I moved higher allowing me easier access to my ultimate target, her sweet dark-haired cunt. As my hand reached her cunt, I realized what Jen’s “freshing up” really meant. She had removed her panties when she came home and I was now touching a very sopping wet cunt. I began to slowly rub my fingers up and down her slit for now avoiding the hard nub of her clit. It was a that point that I heard the door to their den open(in the heat of passion I had forgotten about John, how could I do that I thought!), and turned my head slightly still continuing our kiss in order to see him better. He was standing in the doorway like a statue, his eyes glued to the scene of us on the couch. The way he looked(almost glassy-eyed with his mouth wide open), got me a little nervous that he was going to drop the bottle of wine on the floor. About 30 seconds went by, and he suddenly turned and closed the door. I also noticed that he had turned the turned the latch locking the door after he closed it. This was a very encouraging sign, I thought to myself! As he started to walk toward us, Jen and I broke our kiss and turnedpartly away toward him. Jen continued to play with my tits with her hand, and I still had my hand up her dress continuing to rub my fingers along her cuntlips. He moved around the table in front of the couch and set the wine bottle down on it. He still had this look of amazement on his face still staring obviously at my exposed tits, and as he sat down on the couch next to me he said to Jen, “My God, Jen, your description of Sue’s tits doesn’t even come close to doing them justice! They’re magnificent!” John was continuing to score MAJOR points with me, even as I thought he really didn’t have to do anything more to impress me. He reached up and cupped my right tit with his hand gently pushing Jen’shand from it and with his other hand he reached behind my head and turned my face toward him and we began to kiss. Softly, at first, then with more insistence his tongue began to dual with mine. My first impression was that he was almost as good a kisser as Jen was. He was playing with my nipple now pinching it lightly then rubbing the tip of it with one of his fingers. Jen was doing the same except her longer fingernails were giving me even greater sensations. She moved her other hand from behind me unto my knee then slowly began to move up my thighs. The sensations of feeling their hands on me were rapidly bringing me close to an orgasm as I laid my head back on the couch and allowed their touches to almost overwhelm my whole being. I felt like they were playing my body like a musical instrument. Jen’s hand had thankfully reached my cunt now and she gently moved the front of my thong to the side and she began to run her finger up and down my slit bringing me closer and closer to release. I groaned loudly into John’s mouth, “Your hands feel soooo good on me, if you keep this up I’m going to cum very, very soon! Flick my clit with your finger, Jen! I really need it!!” John briefly broke our kiss and said, “No, No not yet! We can’t let you get off this fast, I think we ought to tease her some more! What do you think Jen?” “I agree, John. This has been too easy so far. I think that she needs to beg for it, don’t you John” “Pleasssse, Pleassssse I am begging for it! I feel like I’m on fire, you have to make me cum! Pleasssse!” For the moment they stopped touching me, I probably should have been pissed about it, but from past experiences bringing me close to an orgasm then bringing me close again and again really makes for some earth-shattering orgasms for me. They weren’t inactive for long though, I felt one of them reach behind me and upzip my dress then both of them pulled my arms up through the straps and then pull the top of it down to my waist. I lifted my ass up and they rolled it over my hips and took it completely off. John again scored some major points by saying, “Wow, your whole body is just terrific, Sue! You are really a tight, sexy woman!!” I felt myself blush a little as Jen said, “Didn’t I tell you that John! She is really a vision of loveliness!!” I guess that the hours I’ve spent in the gym every week have really paid off, I thought to myself. Jack tells me how good I look all the time, but hearing the two of them tell me really made it seem to be true. They were really pushing the right button, both mental and physically,and they went right back to work on me. Both of them started kissing my neck, then lowered down to my tits, each of them raining kisses all over them from the undersides to the tops and sides and around my nipples. They teased me at first then started making love to my sensitive nipples light biting and sucking on them then going back to the other parts of them. They each started to caress my thighs and legs with their other hands, but stopped tantalizingly close to my soaking wet cunt teasing me some more. Hoping to get them more aroused I reached my left hand down to run my hand up Jen’s thigh’s again and did the same with right one to John. I looked down at John and noticed that there was a very large tent inthe front of his sweat pants, and I brushed my hand against several times and observed that it seemed to be getting even bigger. I wonder why, I thought to myself. My other hand had worked its way up to Jen’s cunt and I began to rub my finger on her very large clit then inserted one of my fingers inside her cunt, then two, and then three fingers. I started to fuck her cunt with my fingers, and at the same time was stroking John’s very large erection through his clothes. They began to alternate kissing me again with sucking on my tits, and I don’t know whose hand it was but I felt someone’s finger work its way into my wet cunt and a thumb begin to play with my hard clit. We were all breathing pretty hard, and started to moan with the pleasure our mouths and hands were giving each other. My strategy was working, John took his mouth off of my tit and kneeledon the couch beside me. He reached under my knees and gently lifted them turning me to lay lengthwise on my back with my head now resting on Jen’s thigh. He lifted my right leg and laid it over the top of the couch and he placed my left one back down on the floor. I didn’t know what kind of pleasure he had in mind for us yet, but he quickly buried his face in my crotch sucking my wet black thong into his mouth. Not being satisfied with that he grabbed the sides of my thong and started to roll them off of my hips. I lifted my ass up again and he quickly removed them. As my cunt came into his view, he let out a little gasp saying, “My God, Sue your cunt is sooo beautiful! This is the first red-haired cunt I’ve seen face to face! Well, really face to cunt!”, he laughed. He slowly moved his face back toward my cunt as if he was savoring the view, and inside I was screaming at him to speed it up as I really needed to cum. I felt a sigh of relief and intense excitement as I felt his tongue start of lick up and down my cuntlips again. He would lick it a few times then move down to lick my asshole then back up to my cunt avoiding my clit for now. About the same time as he buried his face in my cunt, I felt Jen stirring and she lifted my head off of her leg laying it gently back on the couch. I watched her as she stood up unzipping her dress and pulled it up and over her head. I heard myself gasp as she stood right beside me completely naked now.
I looked her up and down marveling at how beautiful her body was, her firm tits and sexy dark-haired cunt. I could see the wetness on her cuntlips as she stood there, then got exceeding happy as she kneeled over my head facing John and put a small couch pillow under my head for comfort and lowered herself down onto my mouth. My tongue shot out of my mouth before her cunt got within range on it. Just before I licked her again, I said, “You are soooo stunning, Jen!! I can’t wait to taste your sweet juices again and make you cum all over my face!” She was really wet down there, I could a drop of her juice forming at the bottom of her cunt, and just as she lowered herself enough so that my tongue would touch her I flicked the drop off and onto my tongue. “Ahhhhhhhhh, you taste sooooo good, Jen!” As Jen was getting into positions to have me tongue fuck her, John continued to work his magic on my cunt and asshole. He was trying to fuck both of my holes with his tongue, then he began to concentrate on my clit licking and softly biting it as he spread the lips of my cunt with his fingers giving him better access to it. I was quickly coming to the bursting point and could feel it was going to be a great one! As I ate her I reached my hands under her legs and grabbed her soft tits pinching them and scraping my fingernails over them. She reached down and did the same to mine pinching and pulling the nipples away from my chest. From our last meeting, I guess that she remembered that I do enjoy a little pain with my pleasure. Jen was rubbing her cunt all over my face now even attempted to get mynose inside her then she again placed herself over my mouth again and I drove my tongue inside her then sucked her large clit into my mouth. I could sense that she was about to cum, and frankly so was I as I lifted my hips up and ground my cunt on John’s face. I came first, it was really soooooooo intense! I screamed out, “I’m cumming!! AHHHHHHHHHHH, YES!!! It feels so good don’t ever stop John. I never thought I would stop cumming, it felt so good until finally after what seemed to be 5 minutes the spasms finally stopped and I let my hips fall back onto the couch. I must have had a lot of juices flow during my cum as I felt the wetness against my ass. I sure hope I didn’t ruin their couch, I briefly thought. Thankfully, John took my literally and didn’t stop eating my cunt, and I again concentrated on bringing the lovely Jen off again. I moved my hands from her tits and as John did to me parted the lips of her cunt with my fingers and sucked her hard clit into my mouth. I was sucking on it furiously and it wasn’t long before I heard her exclaim, “I’m cumming, too. AAAHHHHHHHH Sue your mouth feels sooooooo good on my clit!!” As she started to cum I shoved two of my fingers into her cunt and began to finger-fuck her also as fast as I could. She was bucking all around as she came it was hard to keep her clit in my mouth but I managed until she collapsed onto my face. “That was soooooooo good, Sue. You have a very talented tongue and knowjust the right spots to excite me!!” In the meantime, John continued to work his magic with his tongue on mycunt bringing me to orgasm after orgasm. Jen got off of my face and sat down again beside me, stroking my face and neck with her one hand and mauling my tits with the other further intensifying my extreme pleasure. I lost count of the number I had cum somewhere after 5 or 6. John’s tongue had to be tired by now, and I was started to get exhausted from all of my orgasms. So I gently scooted up onto Jen’s leg and pushed his head away from me. “I can’t take anymore, John! I loved the way you made love to my cuntwith your tongue, but enough is enough. I swear that you can eat a cunt almost as good as a woman can!!” We all enjoyed a really good laugh at that statement, and Jen and I laidback with my head still in her lap. It was now about 11:30 by the clock on the wall, and I was wondering what if anything would come next this evening. I didn’t have long to wonder about it as John stood up and said to Jen,”Let’s trade places, we’ll just see if you’re as good as I am!” Jen got up also sat down on the other side of me. John stood by my face and peeled his shirt off over his head revealing his well-toned upper body to my for the first time. I also noticed that something else was “well toned” as it looked like an arrow was poking out from inside of his sweat pants. I swung my legs over onto the floor and now sat facing him, he started to hook his fingers in the top of his pants, but I reached out and stopped him replacing them with my own hands saying, “How about if you let me do them, you can’t be doing all the work tonight!” I slowly pulled his pants down over his hips, I was really excited aboutfinally seeing what was hidden under them. I was careful not to include his underwear as I did. As I got them down below his underwear I almost couldn’t believe that he hadn’t poked a hole in them by now. His cock was actually pulling the cloth away from the underside of them on his legs. Jen bent down and pulled them completely off of his legs. And I was left with a pole not more than 6 inches away from my mouth. I felt myself juicing again and I reached over and began to remove his briefs. As I got down to the point of exposing his pubic hair, I actually had to pull the front of the briefs away from his body in order to get off them over his cock. I quickly removed them the rest of the way, and again I let out an audible gasp as my eyes took in this very impressive specimen of manhood. His cock was hard like a steel rod, and I couldn’t resist reaching my hand out to wrap it around the shaft. From my initial observation it looked to be a little longer than Jack’s so that would make it about 7-8 inches long, but what besides the hardness what made it some impressive was the thickness of it. It appeared to be about as big around as a cucumber. My mouth was wide open and I was afraid that I’d start drooling, then Jen said, “Pretty impressive, isn’t it!! “Wow, I’ll say so, you’re really a very lucky woman to have this cock to fuck you all the time.” I was unconsciously stroking it while we talked, and I could see drop’sof pre-cum starting to flow from his slit. I couldn’t resist flicking my tongue out to lick it clean, and then pulling him closer by his cock, I opened my mouth and sucked the head of it inside my mouth and flick my tongue over the underside of his cockhead. I slowly moved down his shaft taking more and more of it inside, my jaws were wider apart than ever before and I still had another three inches to go before I completely engulfed his member. “My God, that feels soooo good, Sue! You are really good at this! I can already feel my cum starting build up inside me!” “Wow, Sue, your cheeks are so puffed out you look like a chipmunk withnuts in its pouches!” The only thing I could do was grunt when she said that, my mouth had never felt so stuffed before. This was the first cock I’d seen that was thicker than Jack’s, other’s have been close but this one definitely beat his. As I slowly tried to get more of it in my throat, I was thinking that I couldn’t wait to get fucked by this huge cock. Only an inch remained to go when he pulled away from my mouth saying, “I really want to tit-fuck you now!” I laid back down on the couch and he kneeled over me and placed his cock in the cleavage of my tits, I pushed my tits together so that they made a tunnel for him to fuck me. I felt Jen move between my legs and her face bury in my cunt lapping up my juices again. I’d just have to wait to judge which of them ate my cunt better. As he moved back and forth between my tits his cock would come close enough to my mouth that I could flick my tongue over and around the head. “This feels soooo good, Sue! Your tits are just the perfect size fordoing this!” He started to move faster now and was moaning continuously with hisobvious pleasure. After about 5 minutes(I’m surprised that he lasted even this long from the two hours or so of foreplay) then announced, “I’m cumming, I can’t hold back any longer!!” I reached up pulling his cock into my mouth as he said this and then began to stroke it and flick the underside of his cockhead again. He erupted into my mouth, I felt at least 7 or 8 spurts of his cum hitting my tongue, and I swallowed it the best I could. Some of it did run out of the sides of my mouth though, and as he removed his cock from my mouth I must have grazed the underside of his cockhead again and received a last squirt of his cum right between my tits. While he was fucking my tits, Jen had succeeded in bringing me off three times which was really enjoyable, but I felt a little fucked out by this point. So for now, John was the winner but Jen promised to “get him back”, the next time. I looked over and saw that it now almost midnight, and John said, “Ifeel really bad that we can’t spend more time together tonight, but this meeting I’m going to tomorrow is very important to me and I have to be wide-awake at them. I really had a sensational time making love with you tonight, and I really hope that you’ll come back when we can have more time to get to know each other better. I can’t wait to fuck that pretty cunt of yours!!” “Oh, I’ll come back, you can bet on that! I can’t wait to feel it inside me too!! Just let me know when we can meet again, and I’ll make myself available!” “You will definitely hear from us soon! And now, I must take my leave ofyou two lovely ladies and get my beauty rest.” He came over and kissed and hugged me and then Jen and started to get dressed. As he pulled his underwear up over his still half-hard cock I felt a pang of disappointment that he hadn’t fucked me tonight, but now I had something else to look forward to in the future. Jen and I sat for a few minutes more after he left the room asking me how I enjoyed being with them. “You didn’t need to ask that question, Jen! You and John are wonderful people and lovers, I’m just a little disappointed that I didn’t get the opportunity to fuck John, and wished that we could have fooled around more, too!” We got up and started to put our clothes back on, I couldn’t resistreaching out to cup one of Jen’s soft, firm tits in my hand before she pulled her dress down. We walked to the door and she handed me my coat and she promised to call me very soon. I gave her a quick peck on the cheek and left to go home.
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I should have proof read my comment closer!
The sentence should read”…inserts a needless declarative…”
While the story line is a good one the execution leaves a lot to be desired. Poor grammar, spelling, lack of punctuation, run on sentences, and one huge paragraph led me to break off reading the story to its completion. Case in point, ,,,“Would you like a glass of wine, Jen told that you liked merlot, and I stopped at the store on my way home and got a bottle of it?”… Jen told who? The author begins the conversation with a question but inserts and needles declarative statement at the end. Misspelling and grammar mistakes abound, dual instead of duel and unto instead of onto. Spell check is not 100%. The story needed to be proof read before submission. The lack of word spacing occurred frequently causing strange word merging that led to further confuse the reader.
I found this to be a decent story that suffered because of grammar, spelling and run on sentences.